Spider Gwen contest submission

A while back, I was informed of a Marvel Spider-Verse T-shirt design contest. Someone here on DA apparently thought my Spider-Gwen sketch* was shirt-worthy! (Thanks, Beth!) I thought I'd make a more finished illustration based on that design. I wanted to make sort of a fancy border with her webbing, keep it within her costume's color scheme, and hopefully have it double as an original action pose. I chose a more Spider-Man blue for the background for contrast. I'd wear that T-shirt. What do you think? If you have any suggestions, let me know before September 15, as that's the deadline for submissions!

EDIT: I toned down the red in the web a bit, added some white, removed the lines that were clashing with the halftone. This is how it's going out. Wish me luck!

Spider-Gwen © Marvel

The afore-mentioned sketch:

(The thumbnail looks like she's holding the words up!)